WHEN + WHERE
Add some blurb about who you are, what you do, where you do, why you do it, and mention the kids. People love that shit. Especially the kid stuff.
You don't need to go into boring details like where you got your first tattoo, but now I think of it, maybe that's a good story. But tell people why you guys are different. The whole "Doing It For The Community" thing really tests well with women between 21 - 46 according to our focus groups.
Bryan + Bridgett = WHEN + WHERE
(with help from Otto + Ozzy)
But the sad truth is that most people don't read shit. That's why pictures are important. Like the one of this adorable little Munchkin in a big chair. It shows a great product anda great chair, all in one picture! What's not to love?